3 comments on “Run-up

  1. This was, literally, inspired. The middle line leapt out at me from a post I was reading (https://spirittrainchronicles.com/2012/08/15/salusa-15-august-2012/), crying out to become the core of a senryu. I counted … yes, seven syllables! Then the third line arose in my mind(accompanied by the music )from that song by The 5th Fifth Dimension,

    I counted … five syllables! Absolute magic! Then the first line emerged in my consciousness from I know not where. In fact, it was only the title I had to do any work on at all.

    The 5th Dimension!!! 😀

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